Awww this poem is so cute ^_^ it makes me smile, i liked it cause it made me smile ^_^ i want summer back *starts crying* o well
great job 5/5

A little shaky flow wise in a few spots, but the true power of it lies in the imagery, which is amazingly well done.

Wow...very creative...if you think enough its like a portrait..haha..i like the way you used you figures of speech there...really cool...haha...keep on writing!:D