Sad and somber story. We all reminence the things we didn't/did do. Or the things we didn't say. Unfortunatley death is something that comes to all and everyone of us - You drew a very sad and heartbreaking straw in this poem. I'm sorry for your loss; very sorry.

Take care,
- Kalah.

Awwwwwwwwww tjay was so sad!! *hugs* aww!! u wrote it so well.. it made me cry

Aww im so sorry ! i hope your okay! this is a really great poem 5/5 i love your work! love maddison xxx

Wow i find it so touching as i know how it feels. . . it happens to us all eventually but no one reallly knows how to deal with it. i love this poem, it flows and is well written . . . . well done

read some of mine,
lauraxXx

Nice poem

5/5