Say hello to heaven for me
by shawn hoskins Sep 20, 2005
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Say hello to heaven for me,your gone to a better place i see,your life cut short i guess it just wasn't meant to be,you got your wings i know your flying,you left me here deep inside crying,i know the angel's will be smiling when they see your face,i hope you find peace in that beautiful place,your time on earth was hard i see,all i ask is say hello to heaven for me. |
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16 years ago
by munkee04
It doesnt matter that you dont write your poems in stanzas, it is still very good!
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19 years ago
by NannO
Aww.. that was so sweet, it got me in tears.. i reli lykd the idea of the poem, and the fact that it was a short poem, made it all the more sweeter.. i loved it and ur rhyme was in place
keep it up
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19 years ago
This almost made me cry
thanks for all your comments
this is beautiful!
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19 years ago
Beautifully written, i enjoyed reading it ^_^
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19 years ago
by N J Thornton
I really liked this one, very sweet indeed. I also liked the rhyming, it flowed well. Well done.
