I liked this one very much. It seemed to have an amusing factor to it, slightly sarcastic. You kept the flow fluent throughout and only pointed out the necessary but in a detailed manner. I liked the reference to useless subjects; it made me smile because I know exactly what you mean. Very well done, I have no criticism for this one. Keep it up!

Its was strong, and bitter. It seemed to have the "unflinchingly honest" factor that few are willing to just go out and say, which is what makes it a good poem.

Good Writing!
beth

Okay...this sounds like you wrote it in 5 minutes?...it sounds off the top of your head and i really dont like this one its definatly not one your best

Wow, now this was unique made me sit up and listen. My advice: Keep writing! I hope I never become a drone...hehe

[lostlaureate - come find me]

I like how you make this poem sound "angsty" and depressing at the same time. I really enjoy your poetical style.