Our Love

by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT   Sep 21, 2005


What is love?
Is it real?
What is life?
Is it a big deal?

Love is a mystery,
it's not that far-fetched.
It is right in front of you,
thats why you left.

From the misery that surrounded us,
day by day.
That's how I can tell,
our love ended this way.

We were in love,
for years on end.
It took us so long,
so why did it end?

We got through it all,
the good and the bad.
We worked it all out,
that's why I'm sad.

A new girl came,
and of course she was cute.
Suddenly i was no one,
so timid and mute.

It did not matter,
if I tried to impress you.
I mustn't have been worth it,
no matter what I would do.

So was our love real?
OR was it fake?
Please tell me now,
for goodness sake.

I can't stand it anymore,
the jokes, the lies.
I've cried so much,
there's no more tears in my eyes.

My heart is breaking,
from every word you say.
Hurry up and tell me,
why it ended this way.

Your taking too long,
I can't take it anymore.
Because your making my heart,
become too sore.

I'll tell you now,
that it was not me.
It was all you,
because you were to foolish to see.

Our love wasn't fake,
it was for real.
So now your the one crying,
Cause it was a big deal.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey bubs, i really enjoyed this poem! it has short lines in the stanzas which make this poem unique. I liked it because the meaning stayed throughout the whole poem. good job!

    my fav stanza was:

    A new girl came,
    and of course she was cute.
    Suddenly i was no one,
    so timid and mute.

  • :'(

    love you xox

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