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Wow, girl, this is awesome. I love your rhyme scheme and the word choice. i love the message behind it as well. This is awesome...keep it up! You really have talent..this poem realy spoke to me. Aw...it was really cute! |
I really like this poem. I especially like the phrasing! very cool! |
I like the rhytm and rhyme in this poem. It's brevity highlights the fact that sometimes you just need to know someone is there for you. |
by David Novoa
Wow i like it |
Wow that is really good keep it up nice work |
by Sophie
Aww this is soo sweet. well done!! keep it up. |
by Jamie
This is really good. its reallt sweet. thats how my ex was. but its over now and im stuck on him. but its really good... |
by Tara
Awwww |