by ShhhhItsASecret© Sep 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You took me and threw me into that wall! |
Awwww, this is so sad, but beautifully written, the words used express sooo much emotion. |
by ShadowDancer
Once again great work!! im sorry to hear that though.. it was well written. uv got a good grasp on that style, and i love your work. |
How sad that so mean Im sorry that happened to you....It was an awsome poem though great emotion....Much Love....Joclyn |
Awww im so sry:( gr8 poem tho! keep up the gr8 work! this poem didnt have any flaws whatsoever except i thought that the rhyme of me and wee was a bit forced. 5/5 tho!!! |
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You took me and threw me into that wall! |