Dare To Call It Love?

by Lost & Delirious   Sep 21, 2005


If only I could keep you awake an hour every single night.
If only I could make you nervous everytime I walk by.
If only I could live in your dreams and stay in your daydreams too.
If only I could be the reason you smile every morning that you're late to school.
If only I could be the last person in your mind before falling asleep.
If only I could be the one that you rememeber with every single thing.

I guess that won't come true,
Cause that's just the way I feel about you,
But if I could have you,
Dare to call it love? I would...

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  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Pretty good. I give it a 4/5 overall

    "If only I could live in your dreams and stay in your daydreams too.
    If only I could be the reason you smile every morning that you're late to school.
    If only I could be the last person in your mind before falling asleep."

    Some suggestions I have would be maybe to change those lines around a little.. example:
    "If only I could live in your dreams and your daydreams too
    If only I could be the reason you smile, the reason that you’re late to school
    If only I could be the last person in your mind before you fall asleep."

    Saiya

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