Here beside me

Very well done. I like the way you put this together. Have you tried reading from bottom to top? Sounds pretty awesome also. Excellent job!

Great work. Really liked the flow and emotion put into it.

I liked this one is simple and nice
5/5

Awwl well i reallie liked this peom especailly the begining i just think you kinda lost the nice flow in the end but nice job! loved it 5/5

Nice, it's good to want to do something new once a while like that. =)

It sounds like it's a part of a very lovely song.

My favourite lines are:

"I love you
With all I am,
And trust me
Ill do all I can."

Though I think it's foolish act, but it's still nice.

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