Comments : On my Sleeve

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Yes, I definitely liked the flow, and the topic was very nice, and a very cute ending!

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 19 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    I LOVED THAT POEM! kEEP IT IP! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    Very nicely written. The rhythm and flow of it WAS very nice, very smooth. Good job, I liked it. and love how you eneded it with the title!

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This was alright....i like how you used the word tedious here:

    The days would be boring. tedious, and long
    I never want to even think of you being gone

    it sounded cute good poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this and i didnt the ending i think flowed well but the beggining and middle i dont think had the best flow your vocab wasn't too bad but then again the poem it pretty simple and short i think better words coulda helped but its alright 4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    Does 'wearing your heart on your sleeve' mean lke you'll always love him or something? that part really confused me.

  • 19 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow awesome 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    Ohhhhhh so sweet!!! i loved it to bits.....you rock...it was a deep,moving poem.....luv jess xoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Im feeling that right now. i loved how true it holds to so many people.

  • 19 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    I think its great how it is! =) great work. xx

  • This is sooo cute...but right now...well this is the perfect poem about that i feel...great way to express your feelings

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I love it, I don't care it's short. Great job! I like the whole poem, and the title is really original. 5/5