by Truest Lies
Yes, I definitely liked the flow, and the topic was very nice, and a very cute ending! |
I LOVED THAT POEM! kEEP IT IP! 5/5 |
Very nicely written. The rhythm and flow of it WAS very nice, very smooth. Good job, I liked it. and love how you eneded it with the title! |
This was alright....i like how you used the word tedious here: |
by Jamie
I liked this and i didnt the ending i think flowed well but the beggining and middle i dont think had the best flow your vocab wasn't too bad but then again the poem it pretty simple and short i think better words coulda helped but its alright 4/5 |
by Carmen
Does 'wearing your heart on your sleeve' mean lke you'll always love him or something? that part really confused me. |
by nikki
Wow awesome 5/5 |
Ohhhhhh so sweet!!! i loved it to bits.....you rock...it was a deep,moving poem.....luv jess xoxoxoxo |
by aaron c s
Im feeling that right now. i loved how true it holds to so many people. |
I think its great how it is! =) great work. xx |
This is sooo cute...but right now...well this is the perfect poem about that i feel...great way to express your feelings |
I love it, I don't care it's short. Great job! I like the whole poem, and the title is really original. 5/5 |