"As wild as the wind"

"There is always change"

Hum? Very good!

Got me thinking, Thanks

This poem is great chiquita. I am impressed by your talent at such young age! Wonderful. Efficient use of imagery and diction. Well done. Anyways, I am sorry you do not understand my poems, I guess you don't like my style much, but thanks for commenting on my poem.

Wow!! This poem is very cute!! Keep up the good work!!!!! Hope to read more soon!! 5/5 for this great poem!!
Thanks for commenting on mine!!
I have added you to my favourites!!!

I like it. i think it is good. thank you for commenting on my poem and no i do not spell that good.

Hey evry1 thanks 4 commenting on my poem it means a lot 2 me. if this was too sappy 4 u check out my others like crimson stains, die bastard die and everyone you care about they may b others that i cant think of the title,. these are like the opposite of this 1 but about the same person. i guess thats odd. well thanks 4 voting and plz keep it up!!!!!!!!!!
chiquita
luv yal kisses

Nice poem, fairly simple but it worked really well. I liked it alot.
Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

I loved it!!!!! Beautiful write!!! COmment and rate some of my poems plz!!!!

Awww that is so sweeet! i would never e able to come up with something like that. you have a great gift! keep up the good work girl! love you always!
-thornton

It´s amazing!Soooo sweet!you are really talendet!
comment some of my poems pls!!!

Very good. You must really love this Luke person. I hope to write a poem like this but sadly im not in love with anybody like this.....good poem.

Nice use of rhymes and emotion(and whatever else you used in it) 5/5

Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

A brill romantic poem, girl. I would get rid of the 'to me' at the end of the poem. You don't need to mention it and it loses it's rhythm because of it. well done.

Roses die. n it always has to come. but keep ur head up high.

Ik it is really short. and dnt think tht is bad. most epic poems r rlly short but AMAZING. and i really really like this one :-)

Ik it is really short. and dnt think tht is bad. most epic poems r rlly short but AMAZING. and i really really like this one :-)

I LOVE IT!! I know my Threw It Out The Window poem wasn't that good. but i have written a couple more tht the other ppl rlly like. My middle name is rose..thts how this poem caught my eye. I love it. I guess love is a great inspiration :-P

Your poem is beautifue, it inspires me.

Aww, omgthatsso sweet.its differentandvery good. andyes it isreal unfortunately. 5/5

Diana