Comments : Spoken Deception

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    That is incredible! You have true talent and you described these things so well! I loved the whole poem! These few lines stood out to me:

    "Flicker like a candle
    One life in
    One life out
    Too many, too quickly"

    You used great description of life and what it holds. It is unimaginable the depth of your thoughts and feelings. A truly breath-taking poem!