I wish you well

by The Queen   Sep 21, 2005


I wish you well wherever you go
Forget about my tears of appreciation
I know its time for you to leave
The hardest thing for us to believe
But as you go to a far away land
Don't be so heartbroken
You will be in our heart without end.

You might say you'll be okay
Those smiles u tried to paint
Remind us how to be like you
How to be daring when tough gets going.

Just thinking of you in a plane
Feeling sad, small, all alone
Thinking where did you go wrong
Wishing it's just like a nightmare
Haunting you like the usual nights
Just close your eyes and let it out
For once is not bad for a man to cry
Accept the defeats and be ready for the next rise.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    I don't think I've ever read any of your early works before, sissums. I really like this one. :-) Even as a beginning writer (where you just startiong?) you can still deliver a good message with good imagery. ^.^ Nice job, Myryn!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I saw a lot of things in here that I'd change but I won't point them out because it's obvious to see that you have improved in writing and have already fixed the probelms in this poem but not doing them in other poems. I do like how easy this was to understand. Your emotions were cleary expressed here and really hit the reader hard. I can see that your talent has grown and that makes me so happy. You are a brillant writer and it's great to see what has come from years of work. Nice poem hun :) Nik

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow,it was so sad and so touching.The hardest thing in life is getting away from someone you really love.

    Good job5\5...

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