Whoa! What is this about? Just something you wrote or a real experience...that was intense and so well written...I really like this though IT'S NOT HAPPY! lol Very nice write Coonay!

For God's sake SMILE!!! :)

Great write hun, I'm not sure who it's for, but I hope things are okay, if you need to talk about it, you know I'm here...*hugs* I'm sure this person misses you just as much...and maybe things will work out between you. I wish you the best either way, and I love you so much. I hope you always let me in and let me help you. You mean so much to me. xxxxx Please take care. E>

Love you always,
Mortie.x.

Baby this is beautiful
i like the ending
i like the poem as a whole
lovely
i can relate
i wanna look away too from eyes which would reflect all the mess it was...
take care
beautiful work !
5/5 for sure !
love
amy

Wow...from beginning to end it was touching and so sad but yet its a reality that most of us go through everyday...i really liked it it brought me back to memories i hadnt seen in a while. very nice keep up that work.. 5-5