In The Darkness Of The Night

I really like this, it's clever, i like the repetition.
You've got some really good ideas in there, well done !!!!

xxx cici xxx

Ahh! i meant this* now with....dunno how i messed that one up lol...

Wow....i think this is an excellent poem, i really like it...especially these stanzas....

"In the darkness of the Night
I see the blood of all the lost
In the darkness of the Night
I see their lives are the cost"

"In the darkness of the Night
Angels cry for their mistakes
In the darkness of the Night
All the saints turn into fakes

In the darkness of the Night
Nothing is what it seems
In the darkness of the Night
Dreams are life, and lives are dreams"

those three stanzas were absolutely brilliant, the flow was a little choppy in a few places, but all my poems flow badly...with is an excellent piece...keep up the amazing work =)

-brittnay-
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