Wow... that was very touchy... sweet poem.. i think you did a wonderful job-- it conveys the most truest feelings... keep writing...

hoping the best for you

Love,
Ipsita

I really really love this poem alot. I can relate to it very well because I'm going through the same thing with my boyfriend, Thank you for writing this.

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Wow....this poem's so beautiful and so

amazin'. I just love it. I love the tittle

too! You're a great writer, hope to read

some more soon! Take care and alway

keep it up 5/5, smile too :-)

Gesselle
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Yet another great poem! well done babes
xxx

Oooh struck me as quite a dark poem, like it though. Nice repetition of stanza structue >) A Very Laura Poem you can be proud!