No sleep again last night huh? lol. Well good for you..... wooooo hoooo. But seriously, this is breathtaking!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Awwww its soo sweet. aww i think its cool how you "do it" with love and not just to get some. awesome work

That was very ~Hot~ . Now we know where all the nice guys went ... Finally a 100 year old question has an answer !!! * leaves in search of her man *for a little of that WOOT~~WOOT ........*L*

Awesome Write!!! It made em think to my pasionate moments with my boyfriend. My fav verses were:

You pull me to the floor
Straddling my thighs
Your look, wanting more
Desire in our eyes

As we touch and caress
Who is seducing who?
As we completely undress
Our love, me and you

I think this is a great write becuz others can truly relate to the passion that you have shared with us.
Luv Laura

Wow, really beautiful bill! Nice job and just to let you know you're added to my favorites...your poem are really good. Thank you so much for sharing.

Wow! Awesomely hot! Each line just drips with passion, very romantic! Well done~Holly

:p cool lol I like it I wouldint print it off and show anybody though because then they would think im crazzy... I dont want that. but anyways awesome poem beautifully written