Not your best at all my dear, maybe it's just my wondering mind, but I don't really understand it, couldn't grasp it...

Yeah I know, todays not my day, i was reading other peoples poems as well today and everything i thought was bad...and im writing bad...so i think im just having a very off day lol

Very deep but i loved it great stuff!

Nice one very emotional 5/5

Love your descriptive wordings....first stanza would be my fav....but in the second one...i didnt really like the second line...didnt make too much sence to me....still awsome poem...very deep and outstanding...5/5

Wow...i really love this...5/5 for sure...i really wonder where u get ur inspiratin from...keep up the great work