Very good very true writing 5/5

Excellent...this is so true...and too many ppl dont know this or jsut dont care which ends up ruining their t lifes....5/5

Very true the last stanza was worded so well, it was just great...and although this poem was insanley simple and didnt give across a burning passionate point...ill give it a 5/5 just because the last stanza was very good

Pretty good message, but you can work on the flow and add more details.

Again this is true, well worded,
i'll give you a 5/5

This is a very true poem. I regret alot I do on the whim of just five seconds. Great poem!

This poem is good but i think you coulda gone into a little more depth ...4/5

I think this poem worked well and i like the message in it.
XxX cici xxx

Eh it was good but it could be better. it was hard to follow in some parts and there wasnt really a steady flow. good job anyways.

Lol i liked the meaning but didnt flo to well no affence. 4/5

WOW! THis is sooo good. And so true! I love your poetry. it is soooo true and meaningfull. keep it up! 5/5

Love
haily

Truer words have never been said i am really starting to love your style of poem thanks for shareing

This piece has a bouncy sort of rhythm to it.. its catchy.. short but sweet too.. im not so sure how good the last line is.. i mean.. i like the rhyme, but it just seems a little.. unpoetic i guess.. its backed by a good idea and stays focused on the main topic.. theres not much else i can suggest with this poem..

Yup your so right keep up the amazing work girl 5.5

I like the poem
i voted it 5/5 because its got a lovely thought !!
um.. i really like the ending too :-)
love
amy

I love it! I really like the ending too. 5/5 Good message ;D

Dis poem is excellent babe its really well written an i totally agree wiv u xxx

So true, but I feel like you can do a little more . The flow was pretty off . You could add a little maybe, but overall, it`s nice (: There was some catchy thing about it, but it`s not totally out there `naa mean ?
..__MiNDYY