Very touching poem, simply because, any baby shouldnt have to grow up with its daddy not around.

Might want to proof read this again,

"It's so painful to see here there laying on the bed crying "

once again ill give you a 5/5!very good job!

Awwwww :( this is so sad but i really enjoyed this poem alot. This poem is so sad like i said but it gives off everything your feeling. Like you can't be there for the family you have gave away. I mean seeing them crying well the wife and then having the baby never knowing who her or his father is ever. That must be really hard. But you did an amazing job on this poem. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Aw! that was so sad

Aw.. this one is so sweet, i liked it very much

Omg this is so sweet and so sad...i absolutly adored this one...5/5

Very good poem, sad too. 5/5 you are a very talented writter. keep it up

It's very nicelt done. I would had apprecitaed it more if you put your poem into a more poetic formation and not something that appears very...paragraph like.

My favourite lines are:

"A tear falls frim my eye as it's time for me to go,
I look at my baby and I say love you, I'm the daddy you'll never know."

I was goona ask you if this is all true then I realized, he's not dead. =)

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Very very sad
and almost i dunno how to describe it which is a good thing i suppose
its very good

great job your a good poet!

Very very sad but it is a
wonderful poem
you are a great
writer excellent job
love always
tabby

Very touchy and sad amazing poem

Aww ... so sad, this is very touching ^^ Love it.

This poemw as so beautiful, hauntng , and sad. The ending was...can't describe it but I got a good vivid image form it. I just have to get used to the format because your poems are really worth reading.

Wow. nice. the descriptions of her are so rich. it was very easy to visualize. so tragic. i can't fathom how this experience would feel like. this is a very good representation, i think. 5! thanks for your comment on 'halloween II', by the way! -beav

Awww how sad. I really liked your style, its different and unique..and it also fits. The flow was great and the poem definitely held emotion. Great job and keep it up.

Honestly that gives me a goose bumps and it was really sad.. simple poem but could really touch someone's heart. but to make it more interesting and captivating to the reader's eyes better reformat it, i mean arranged it in a way that it may look more of a poem than an essay (divide it into and lines and stanzas).. but it was still a flawless and touching poem.

Aww! i love that! its great.
Good job! =]