Nice poem Whitney...can't wait to read more...take care and keep it up 5/5

It dosn't suck...it makes sense....but it is simple and plain and there are no advanced words...i think your a great writer with great ideas but a better vocab and maybe a different formet on your poem would work better...just thoughts 4/5

~*That was beautiful, i loved it keep up the work 5/5*~ XoXo