That was a nice poem..sorry i coukldnt be there back then..soirry i couldnt be here.....sorry......byebye...

I walked around the camp house,
And looked into the trees.
I saw a clubhouse, good as new,
And a tear rolled down my cheek.

The second And...I think it would sound better if you changed it to something as, "as" or such...it just makes more sense. Still, its a very good poem. 5/5

Very good poem.Long and good.Your really good jess.

Awesome poem babi girl. i loved ur poem so much. i'd walk the few hundred miles separating us just so u'd have a shoulder to cry on. i love u babe! 5/5
eLiZaBeTh

I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's awsome.
u r realy talented!
5/5 for sure

take care.

adios!

pili

Hey Jessica
I really luv all your poems, they have such a reality to them,this one is one of my favourites. Do u put alot of thought into them or do the words just come naturally?
From Your Partner In Crime And Annoyance.

Aww..jess, i loved this. It almost put meh to tears*sniff sniff*..lolz *huggles* great job hun!

Kristina

Aww how sweeet... dam dis was hell gwd wel i think so lol
gwd job hun keep it up
mwa luv ya
luv dia mwa xoxxoxoox

Hmmm so sad kinda reminds me wen i remember my frends n grampa...i loved my grampa so much... i see his ghost all da time... thanks jess 4 dat wonderful poem...

Wow Jess that was really touching. I know how it feels to have a best friend move away. It really hurts and this poem made me remember the pain that I felt when she moved away. This poem made me cry and in my words that means that I love it. It was absolutely p-e-r-f-e-c-t. Keep on cause I love to read everything!!100/5

TAKE CARE-
stargazer38

That poem made me cry good job