Vampiric Ecstasy

by Simon Hayes   Sep 22, 2005


Tremble a word and mutter a silence
Immortal being and bloody violence
Sky is no limit as night passes day
Longing to bite you, still as you lay

Sinking in deep to the core of the bone
Feeling no sorrow as she begins to moan
A chill in the air keeps my blood flowing cold
Weakness holding her neck oh so bold

A presence of darkness, a tale of night
Waiting to hold you and rid you of fright
Then just as I thought that my chances were made
You returned and whispered deeply "I'm no longer afraid!"

Taking to air to capture the sight
Hiding away as they turn on the light
Sleeping in stillness hidden away
'Til night come again so we can play!

© Simon Hayes 7th December 2004

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    Wow, I was in the found to read some older poems today and I must say I love this one. I'm a vampire lover myself and the haunting tone and desire...absoultely fabulous!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really like how you worded this poem. It doesn't make sense, but the eerie feeling you get from it, does distort the mind, and randomness is needed, which you have accomplished. You definitely make it to my favourites. Well done :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    Im in awe. I absolutely loved that, it was phenomenal. The first stanza in itself was just gripping, I just couldnt let go. Its personally my fave. one so far. Very well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I love the first line! Don't get me wrong the entire poem is brilliant. But that opening line is awesome! Keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by ratchild666

    This is a great poem and story. excellent stuff. ^_^

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