Vampire poem... chilling yet beautiful. Like ecstacy. It's not only dark, but it's also got a sense of thirst and desire, I liked it.
Definetely a well written piece!

Ooooh i love it, very dark and mysterious, i really really did enjoy that, great work.

This is a great poem and story. excellent stuff. ^_^

I love the first line! Don't get me wrong the entire poem is brilliant. But that opening line is awesome! Keep it up~Holly

Im in awe. I absolutely loved that, it was phenomenal. The first stanza in itself was just gripping, I just couldnt let go. Its personally my fave. one so far. Very well done!

I really like how you worded this poem. It doesn't make sense, but the eerie feeling you get from it, does distort the mind, and randomness is needed, which you have accomplished. You definitely make it to my favourites. Well done :)

Wow, I was in the found to read some older poems today and I must say I love this one. I'm a vampire lover myself and the haunting tone and desire...absoultely fabulous!!!