This poem is amazing and you've really expressed yourself well. i can totally agree with it and the message at the end as recently one of my m8s tried to take her own life. luckily she has so much people that care about her she was found and taken to hospital b4 it was 2 late. the story behind this poem is really clever too.

Great poem...I like it alot. Nice job and thanks for caring so much. I like the P.S. that you'd wrote at the end of your poem, nice advise...hope people take it serious. Take care 5/5 amazing poem....keep it up ^_^