Really good poem! 5/5
Well, I'm really sorry that you went through so much pain...and that you'd cried so much. Hope things are better now. Take care and thanks for sharing your poem with us, keep it up ^_^

Nice poem Dwight...I like what it was saying...Thank you for commenting on my poem..do u have ne suggestions for the desciption of the last word???
Joclyn

Danke fürs kompliment.Your poems were excellents.I like it!