by Adinda Sep 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A river stole my blood, darkness took away my sight, the night made my body colder and colder, my sense was grabbed away and the rhythm of music caught the beat of my heart. “Am I dead now?†Was my first thought while I saw my body next to me. |
Um, not sure what to say about this. It's deep, but you should try to amke it rhyme, u could get your point across much better |
Hey, good poem:) i also wanted to say that your quotes are really good, i like them:)xxx |