Wow...this poem is soooo beautiful and sad!!
Your poems are really good!! You have so much talent!
Love ya

I can feel this poem as i read it, it's so emotional and very deep. Nice. 5/5.

W0w... sounds so familiar... well in my "mind" i can really feel this poems emotion and i love that... i have read every single one of your poems and you are in my favorites... so please keep it up... you have some real talent!! 5/5 i absolutly love it!!!

That Was Very Deeply Put, Powerful Emotions Ran Through This Poem And Into My Heart....I've Had a Few Bad Relationships In My Life And I Can Fully Relate To That Heartache...Brilliantly Beautiful 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Awesome.. its a sad poem but you're a very talented writer keep it up
take care
amanda

Another good one! I can relate to this! Keep it up! 5/5

Love
Haily

While reading this I was hoping the girl would realize he isnt worth it :(
But it is a great poem and many can relate to being heart broken.
Your flow was great and it was a sad poem. well done..

If its true, dont let what happened in the poem happen in real life. You have a talent, dont let anyone take that away from you.

xxx

Very dark, but I could picture the girl, the pills and the mascara. It sounded like she was hopeless and wasn't thinking straight that day. Nobody should kill themselves over broken promises and because they've been let down, if they did, we'd all be dead.

Good Writing!
beth

This is a very emotional poem! I love it! Keep up the good work! :) 5/5

Yet another excellent poem.

I especially like the rhyme scheme. =)

My favourite stanza were:

"She feels an inner peace
as she thinks of death
the blood stops running
as she takes her last breath"

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Very well written, I really liked it. it flowed very well and it was just so easy to picture, the image of the mascara eyes is amazing. The only complain I'd have is that the first stanza strongly resembles part of the song 'Everything Burns' by Ben Moody ft. Anastacia. I dunno if it wa sintentional or not. nonetheless, nicely written!

Great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can relate so well to this one too, I like this guy, who keeps promising me we will see eacother more, but he brakes them, and it hurts me everytime...YOu are so good.....

The rhyming was great and the flow was awesome! Great job! I could feel the emotion and that's very important in poetry, so *two up* :D
~BJ~

Aww this poem was so good i think you have alot of talent and you are using it well keep it up 5/5
take care,

holly

Hey
I really love your writing. I'll add you as my favorite.
Your sad poems are so deep, love them. 5/5

Hun!
jesu christo, that was beautiful.
my favourite part:
red tears from her wrists
torn apart by his lies

you are a poetic genius, definitley on my favourites :)

HuGz abbi xxx

Is this about your boyfriend...now I get it...

Love it as usual 5/5