by aaron c s
Please vote and comment. it would be much appreciated. thank you. |
Aaron... another great poem!! Two thumbs up... if I had more, I'd say 10, but I don't have that many thumbs ;). Anyways... I loved the poem, keep it up :D |
Hey i like the new name...lol good for u.. |
by Marjan
I enjoyed reading this poem aaron |
by NannO
Hey, that was reli gud.. deep words in the poem, told it all.. gr8 job with this one.. gud with the rhyme. flow wasnt bad, either.. keep going |
I can relate to this in a lot of ways.Those empty days, days the writing don't come, or just depressive gray days.I love the title and the throne line-good stuff.The rhyme scheme isn't perfect but it flows smoothly enough to not matter.Any writer, dreamer, loner would be touched by this.Although I'm not sure I care for the end sentiments-Too often mind and heart conflict,the mind is indeed important, but now that I'm older(&wiser-ha-ha!)I've realized that if you listen to and follow your heart it will never lead you wrong.Anyway, keep writing, your talent will only grow.Good job here, if a bit ambiguous. |
by Melissa
What a beautiful poem and yet so true! Excellent write! |
Wow.... |
by cant sleep
Ur empty thoughts are amazingly full. u dont even know. n e wayz! I havent written for a while, so decided to rite...NOW!!! really, the only thing i have to say......wow!!! LOVE IT! |