Our Very Own Romeo and Juliet

by hopeless08   Sep 22, 2005


We were perfect together
No problems at all
Until she came into the picture
She wasn't happy so
She didn't want me to be
With the one I loved
Her and dad were not together
And she destroyed us
Because of her sorrow
She forced me to end it
Why did she have to be so cruel
I don't understand
I'm her daughter
I thought she wanted me happy
But she didn't care and never did
She threatened me
Baby can't you see
She's not around anymore
Can we try this
Just once more
Could we be
Our very own Romeo and Juliet

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  • 19 years ago

    by hopeless08

    Thank you I hope so too. No problem on the comment I enjoy reading poetry and yours was really good. Thank you for the comment too.

  • 19 years ago

    by coupon can

    I really like that poem...specially the title. um... i hope everything works out for u and i also hope u don't end up like Juliet lol.and thanx for ur comment on my poem.