The darkness rain holds

by LoVeAbLeShOrTie   Sep 22, 2005


I stand outside
Cold and dark
I look around
I hear rain drops falling on the road next to me

No one is around
No one to help
No one to save me

I tried for so long
To make you see
I needed you

I stand alone
The blade slowly slides across my wrist
The rain is coming down heavier now
The blood is slowy washed away

Along with my life
Just another cold and rainy day
Just another death thats soon forgotten
Another grave stone..

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  • 19 years ago

    by BloodScars

    First it was me n tiffani then me n tiff got happy now u n anna are depressed I LOVE YOU DONT BE SAD U GOTS A GUY N SO DO ME AND TIFFY YAY he he im so retarted dont ya love me, ^_^ but i LOVE YOU GIRL be happy and good things will happen to you ^_^ lol ok i told that to tiff n she didnt listen then she got cameron idk its werid but I LOVE YOU he he see you tomorrow *kisses*

  • 19 years ago

    by **Ashleigh*Sue**

    ASHLEY NICOLE,
    you should write bout happy stuff not sad, depressing things. gosh wut r u thinking? lol well it was relly good keep it up. love ya always,
    ***aShLeIgH***

  • 19 years ago

    by BreatheNoMore

    Nice. keep writing!! please rate my poem-Alive Again if u get the chance :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ..::.alreadyGoNe..::.

    Wow. deep poem ash. omg you know what's funny all my poems are so depressing and my last one is acutally kinda ...lovie. but it's still kinda in a confused way. lol. anyways keep it up

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