by XxTeArSxX17 Sep 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
( i know it's long but plz R/R/C and i do the same.) |
Awwww its so cute and that boy better appreciate u writing these poems for him...but if he doesn't then u r just wasting ur time...ur very talented and i really look up to u....keep up the GREAT work |
That is exactly how I now but I don't have anything, including a house b/c of Katrina. GeREAT POEM! I enjoyed it VERY much! :) |
by Carmen
I totally know how you feel, and i feel the same way. i've found a few tiny spelling/grammatical erroes: 'Laying in my bed' should be 'Lying in my bed ', 'met' in stanza 5, sentance one should be 'meet'. thats about it. awesome poem; 5/5 |
Really sweet poem... even though im bawling my eyes out, love is making me depressed, but it really is well written |
Again, really nice, i can relate to this and i like the way you've writen it. |