I liked it it was very good 5/5

I liked the poem, although i think you could have used a different ending. You could twist around the last sentence to be a question, basically asking "will you ever be done being mad at me?" or something like that. The whole poem seems sort of like a plea for your friend to stop being mad, so it just seems like the actual request is a fitting ending for your poem.

Loved the poem. Very well-written and the rhymes were excellent. Nice job.

Some of the rhyming seemed forced in both the first and second stanza...just a bit of refrasing would be awsome...4/5

I thought could have have done a little better with the tittle, since not once has the poem mention the word "Bye."

I like the piece, I thought she did somethin to upset you at first, but it turns out that you did something to her.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

The poem its self is great but the title I would also change ...To maybe ....
*Shattered friendship*
Just a suggestion ... But the poem is great ....
Looking forward to reading more ....

This is simple & beautifully done !
good job
5/5
love
amy

Now i read it i am wounderin gwhy this person is mad at you.. ummm well nice poem keep up the good work 5.5

I assume whichever friend you're reffering to in the poem has read it? Seems like the best course of action.

4/5, Nice but could use some refrasing I think. It just seems like something might be missing or could be said differently. I really like it though, so keep it up. :)

God Bless
Saiya

Aww hUn sUch an aMazing p0em!! hEarTfElt linEs!!! t0uching w0rDs! vEry welL writtEn!!