But now you wonder......

by coupon can   Sep 23, 2005


I'll fake this smile
so you won't worry
But one of this days
I just won't come back
You won't realize the first day
But on the second day
You'll wonder
And I'll laugh
I don't want to see you get hurt
But you were selfish
You didn't let me die
You should have let me die
At least you would know were I am
But now you wonder
Because you don't know
If I'm dead or alive

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    I LOOOOVEEEEDDD this part:
    "But now you wonder
    Because you don't know
    If I'm dead or alive"

    excelente.

    I loved the whole poem, short but perfect and it says what it has to say..feeling dead while alive, i can understand that feeling :)

    ADIOOS c ya

    I forgot, we should make a campain or somethin:

    "She's like AIDS. Use condoms ppl!!!!"

    lol i luv that kind-of-quote XD

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    A great metaphor of a life walking around dead to everyone. i liked it a lot.

  • 19 years ago

    by +Fouillis+

    Nicely written and very sad. it hits home, u rite well...

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Great poem hun, its okay! im here 4 u if u want to talk to someone! please comment and vote on goodbye everyone (4 real) and a life of total unhappiness! thanx hun....hang in ther! luv maddison xxx

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