Great poem hun, its okay! im here 4 u if u want to talk to someone! please comment and vote on goodbye everyone (4 real) and a life of total unhappiness! thanx hun....hang in ther! luv maddison xxx

Nicely written and very sad. it hits home, u rite well...

A great metaphor of a life walking around dead to everyone. i liked it a lot.

I LOOOOVEEEEDDD this part:
"But now you wonder
Because you don't know
If I'm dead or alive"

excelente.

I loved the whole poem, short but perfect and it says what it has to say..feeling dead while alive, i can understand that feeling :)

ADIOOS c ya

I forgot, we should make a campain or somethin:

"She's like AIDS. Use condoms ppl!!!!"

lol i luv that kind-of-quote XD