WOW...thats something that i can really relate to... i no how u feel and if you ever wanna talk, im here...maybe u could comment on some of my poems? that would mean a lot to me. Theyre not much good tho. oh well..emles

This is really reall good.... i love it!
keep up the writing
luv always smiling

WOW!!! i love this poem!!! i know just EXACTLY how you feel, i feel like that all the time, its really good and really deep, once again i give your poem a 5/5

I enjoyed it. I can really relate to it. I'm sure most of us on here can. Keep writing and don't give up.

I think you just described a lot of ppl. dont try to be perfect it will only lead to sadness because your after an impossible dream.

Very true.
it made me think....
*nobody's perfect*
..but, what happens when they expect u to be perfect? the feeling of failing to the ones i love is what scares me.

^^ byeee take care!

-pili-