Please

by *Lauren*   Sep 23, 2005


Got no one left to turn to,
I've pushed them all away.
The ones I have to listen,
Would rather go and play.

I've taken this heavy load,
And placed upon myself,
The responsibility,
To become someone else.

But I can't listen to me,
I don't hear my problems.
Need you there to sympatize,
Listen to my problems.

Please.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emotionless Riot

    Ever heard that song "Break me, shake me?" By Savage Garden. The chorus goes, "So break me, shake me, baby, take me over." Anyways, off subject.
    Nice... very...nice. :D
    I liked it. The last verse could do with some work but the first verse was brilliant. :D
    PLEASE check out some of my poems!! PLEASE!!
    Riot xxx :[

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