I like this poem of yours. It is very sad though and very strong poem that the reader can actually feel the loneliness between the lines. well I guess you are a new writer here in poems-and-quotes coz i just saw a few of your work. I hope you'll keep writing more so that i can see you around. anyway tnx for leaving a comment on my work titled "sunset". later!

Very Very Good. Just like my poem, I can relate to it. Guys, they are so painful aren;t they. all they are is a bucnh of lies and "almosts." Veryy good job...i think ur version is better then mine!!! 5/5

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