by Brandy Sep 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I wanna Tell you how I feel |
by sarah
I gave you a 5 on this one because i really think the poem is amazing you put your deep feelings into it. i like that in a poem the only thing was the ending seems so harsh and its like it just stops kind of like when your watching tv and the show your watching gets to the climax then on the screen you see To Be Continued. maybe if you went more on with your poem it would draw more attention |