You†

by lipgloss.and.letdown   Sep 23, 2005


Yeah, you liked me but not like how i loved you.

I gave you my soul and heart.
And now my life.

As i lie on the floor the last of my red poison blood falls from my wrists.

Blackened tears of hatred fall across my pale, stone cold face.

And as i lie with my last gasping breath all i can say is I love you still.

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  • 19 years ago

    by coupon can

    Aweosme poem...i like short poems. ur an awesome writer. keep up the good work.and thanx for the comment on my poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Good.....i like the story behind the poem....but i wish it had some typoe of flow....4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    ^_^
    Really good short little poem 5/5 I like it because not matter what he feels, you know the way you feel, it shows how sure you're about yourself! Great job, keep it up and take care

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