Life force

Strong words.loved it

Short and sweet. very true. people do hav fake smiles now a days. good job dear!!!
but u keep smiling ( from ur heart):0)
take care
bharti

So simple, so short & u said it all...lovely
i really do believe that the shorter the poem is...more meaningful it becomes & writing short requires more talent.

**my feelings**

this was really good.

thnx a ton for ur comments on my work...i really appreciate that.
take care

Awesome poem although short yet simpe written, sorry i've never had a chance to read your poem before, hope things is better than yesterday! have a good day, take care.

bert.~

Hold on to your hat... things will get better soon... hope is the only thing that makes humankind live each day.. great work..

Love,
Ipsita