Neat. i can't really say much about it because it's so short, but I really liked it. 5/5 for creativity.

The light is never far away when you are walkin in darkness...b'coz nothing in life is ever lasting....Everything will change has time moves on....Take care and keep smiling.....

Hmmm....where you had been all these days...Busy with ur studies or exams...neway,take care....

Hold on to your hat... things will get better soon... hope is the only thing that makes humankind live each day.. great work..

Love,
Ipsita

Awesome poem although short yet simpe written, sorry i've never had a chance to read your poem before, hope things is better than yesterday! have a good day, take care.

bert.~

So simple, so short & u said it all...lovely
i really do believe that the shorter the poem is...more meaningful it becomes & writing short requires more talent.

**my feelings**

this was really good.

thnx a ton for ur comments on my work...i really appreciate that.
take care

Short and sweet. very true. people do hav fake smiles now a days. good job dear!!!
but u keep smiling ( from ur heart):0)
take care
bharti

Strong words.loved it