'Twas interesting! [:
I loved how you described each bit, Near the end I thought your sentances could've been longer to complete the flow but was still a good poem. Well done.

Loved this line [A screaming grumble, an unheard plea]

Your poems seem to have single lines that put me in awe. Goooooood work. =)

Oh I like this. It has a lot of meaning. On the outside and in the inside. Even if you didn't notice it yourself. =P

The flow was ok, but could be improved a little. I liked the meaning in it. 'A mystery life.' Wow. Deep lol. To me it came out as we never know what's going to happen next, and we should take life for granted. Nice job of thinking of that and being able to write it in a poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha