by Spitfire Sep 23, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
There was a girl |
Wow. so sad. 5/5. |
It's really sad but the flow is hard to follow. You should work on that. |
by .
Good poem 5/5 |
Its sad..but Laken and I like it. (laken=friend) I really know thats a problem with kids around the ages of 13-18..and it cant be saved..comment on some of mine..thanks for the new comment. |
by Torn
Aww thats so sad... |