Forgotten

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Sep 23, 2005


I can no longer stay here
Just hoping happiness will appear

You won\'t notice my absence I know
You\'ve forgotten me long ago

each day i'm blinded by tears
wishing i can be free of all cares

I can no longer stay here with my fears
I've stayed here for far to many years

If I were to bleed
I'd bleed knowing you don't care

dispite all empty prayer
I'll die with you no where near

my life cannot be spared
I know you never cared

part of the life that you once had
now all I have is this knife

I will soon be history
soon just be another faded memory

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dave

    Excelent rhmye once again remarkabel timeing and good layout

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    I love the meaning behind this, and i can't really say anything bad about it, cuz i know what its like to feel this way. I know ur not finished, but i would like to comment on the format. maybe when ur finished, u would be able to create more stanzas, so that the flow could make more sense. :) its a really beautiful poem, and i can relate to it. hopefully it gets better when its finished.

  • 19 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    This is soooo sad and yes i did love it...i like the way you write and i think you have a lot of hurt to get off your chest so just keep writing and i'll be here to read...i love when you said "I will soon be history
    soon just be another faded memory"
    that was just beautiful...keep doing what u doing

  • 19 years ago

    by Dawn Manna

    I like it so far but the rhyming is a little too much. i will read it when it is finished. 4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    I think its great just the way it is! 5/5

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