I'll e waiting for the end of it. Looks good so far.

Wow this is so sad and depressing...im sure lots off ppl feel the same way and your not alone...5/5

I think its great just the way it is! 5/5

I like it so far but the rhyming is a little too much. i will read it when it is finished. 4/5

This is soooo sad and yes i did love it...i like the way you write and i think you have a lot of hurt to get off your chest so just keep writing and i'll be here to read...i love when you said "I will soon be history
soon just be another faded memory"
that was just beautiful...keep doing what u doing

I love the meaning behind this, and i can't really say anything bad about it, cuz i know what its like to feel this way. I know ur not finished, but i would like to comment on the format. maybe when ur finished, u would be able to create more stanzas, so that the flow could make more sense. :) its a really beautiful poem, and i can relate to it. hopefully it gets better when its finished.

Excelent rhmye once again remarkabel timeing and good layout