Wow! Amazing job! It was really good and well written. Keep it up.

"As I blink away your stare" That line just grasped me, wow, it's brilliant!
I LOVE how you put this piece into brackets- it made it seem like this poem was a whisper, it was spoken, yet to be forgotten... well, of course the poem wouldn't be forgotten, but the narrative made it seem so.
Clear message- moving on. Life's no love story; it doesn't last.
I'm in awe of your use of vocabulary and ability to paint a picture. Well done!

That is an amazing poem! sooooooo good. like sooooooooo good. lol. awesome.

Lv A, x

This was well written and your choice of diction was good. Well done!

Warmest regards,

Steve

This should be a song Kaitlin...and if it's non fiction, and based upon the thread you created not so long ago...then i'm very sorry to hear about your loss.

You should still come to Scotland though...the herbal T here is amazing.