by LadyPearl Sep 24, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Once my fingers touch that key |
*smiles* |
*smiles* |
by Carmen
You've described writing poetry amazingly. 5/5 |
by Jason Meres
Love your imagery here, for some reason it conveys rays of sunshine to me. I enjoyed it very much. |
by Dark Kitten
Brilliant poem as always! But I don't know if 'paper' and 'pure' rhyme that well. Because paper is a two syllable word and pure is a one syllable word. 5/5 |