VERY GOOD AND VERY TRUE 5/5 |
by John Bender
As always Noni. You did a great job with one. You should take a look at some of my new ones if you could thanks keep up the great work |
Awsome....its not as good as your dark ones...but hey thats just me b/c im in love w/ your dark poems....5/5 |
by Dark Kitten
Brilliant poem as always! But I don't know if 'paper' and 'pure' rhyme that well. Because paper is a two syllable word and pure is a one syllable word. 5/5 |
by Jason Meres
Love your imagery here, for some reason it conveys rays of sunshine to me. I enjoyed it very much. |
by Carmen
You've described writing poetry amazingly. 5/5 |
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*smiles* |