Great poem. i loved the images it evoke. brilliantly written. keep it up.

Holly has been one of my favorites for quite awhile and the masterpiece you two put together was simply breathtaking ..

Two beautiful minds put together to create a very impressive write ..
Simply emotional and flawless from beginning to end ..

Omg this is really really sad...
the title pulled me in cos i get so so so many dreams lol.....
but this is a brilliant poem....its amazing how u can write dark tsuff....i get scared with the very thought of it lolz....neways keep writing hun!
ps- couldja check out my poems too??? no compulsion tho....cyaaaa